Monday, April 19, 2010
Omaha World Herald
Okay so on the front page of the headlines reads: City retirees told health benefits are too costly, might change. The the first sentence of that story is the city of Omaha had told its retirees that their health benefits are becoming too costly and may be changed. These two sentences are way too similar and it makes it seem like they didn't spend any time coming up with a headline or lead into the story. This makes me wonder if the Omaha World Herald staff makes pro/con lists after a couple issues. If they do that should be put into the con section because it's sloppy.
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